Monday, 21 November 2011

Literacy 22-11-11

Slide 5
Rescue at sea!

Dramatic scenes occurred on Wednesday night when the storm of the century hit the Atlantic coast. Loss of life was narrowly avoided.

Children in Rescue Drama


The Off-Shore Lifeboat Service was once again at the centre of a dramatic rescue when it was called out last Wednesday night. Three children had been spotted drifting out to sea by a passer-by. They were in a small boat as the weather deteriorated. They were named as Jack Morris (10), Jonas Leech (10) and Sam Patel (11).

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When: Last night
Who: Mr. Andrews
Where: on holiday in Greece
What: rushed to hospital with bad sunburn
Why: fell asleep in the sun.
Good para
A man was rushed to hospital late last night, with suspected third degree burns from bad sunburn. He had been relaxing by the pool whilst on holiday. It is thought he fell asleep in the sun. The man has been identified as Mr Andrews.
Bad para
Mr Andrews had to go to hospital because he got really bad sunburn. It was sunburn all over his arms and his legs and he even had a sunburnt nose. He couldn’t sit down without it hurting. He couldn’t stretch without it stinging. In fact, Mr Andrews couldn’t even yawn without his sunburn causing him pain.

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